Clouding around the edge of the picture. Contrast of the black and white. The light in the back of the picture pops out more so you notice the child and the ball. Use a silhouette cut-out to make the silhouette of the child?
Silhouettes are amazing, and I love the three deer (three is a magical number). I also love the light rays making it look early in the morning and giving the dusky feeling. Making the picture black and white was a good choice.
went to spend a few weeks at friend's cabin, a well needed getaway. when pitching the relaxation trip he forgot to mention cabin is in the middle of a creepy forest, then friend leaves (wife goes in labor) leaving protagonist alone in unfamiliar sketchy s